Alliteration
For this poem we had to write two sentences about water using alliteration. My poems/sentences, explanation and my inspiration is below.
- The water gently gabs the calm water.
- The water splashes swiftly into the delicate water.
1. I was inspired by this because I was thinking of a verb that touches you, but the water gently gabbing is the same thing as like touching your face but the water is touching the water.
2. I got the inspiration from this by thinking of ways that liquid do, for example I looked at my picture and I looked at the water carefully and I noticed that the water was all around the place.
I think you need to finish this one. Where are all the other vocabulary words?
SIsaac - April 21, 2011 at 8:25 am |